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What He Deserves
5 reviewsThis is one battle he knows he'll never win... (SasukexSakura) My first short!
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What He Deserves
(#) Entilzah 2007-02-28
Very moving and an excellent drabble.
It was a little confusing on who was holding whom where, but not enough to truly distract from the story.
Does he live, does he die? What happens next? Good questions, but probably best that there are no answers. Story is better that way.
As for the next one... I vote FF7, but that is mainly because I have extremely limited knowledge of the other. But let your muse take you!Author's response
I was trying to convey a certain disorientation on Sasuke's part, so I let the details of their arms go a little fuzzy. In the story Sasuke and Naruto have just come out of battle (what battle is up to the reader's imagination), so he's kind of out of it. But maybe I could have made the existance of that disorientation a little clearer?What He Deserves
(#) ferret019 2007-02-28
thank u for your help and i luv the story so im guna read the rest toAuthor's response
Anytime! And thanks for the rate/review!What He Deserves
(#) miriya 2007-02-28
A technical drabble is one hundred words exactly, though most things that people call drabbles won't stick to that. Under a thousand is called a 'short short', under five hundred is 'flash fiction'. :3Author's response
I see! Thanks for the info. I'll make the changes so that people don't get mixed up about what exactly it is. I guess I added an extre zero to a drabble's count! XDWhat He Deserves
(#) marikunin 2007-03-01
Awww, so sweet! You should do a NaruHina one, but I'm not forcing you. :)Author's response
Actually I was kind of thinking of it. They're my favorite Naruto pairing (couldn't you tell from the last story?) and I thik it's time for a little war-&-fuzzy for them. But that won't be for a little while yet. My literary plate is full at the moment. ;)What He Deserves
(#) i_love_kiba 2007-03-02
I agree, very sweet. I just wish Sasuke was actually like that!
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