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two more people die, what will the towns people think of the the previous disapperances?
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The Shallows
(#) Aura 2007-08-19
Hello again.
I thought i may as well review all three chapters. I liked this one as well. Yeah i know i said that each time but if i don't like a story i don't read it, let alone review it.
i just want to say this, and it may sound like a strange part to point out but i like how you worded this part "as the male shoved his erect peice of flesh into her open wet, love cave" instead of the usual way it would be written, as it goes with the whole water theme.
Anyway, just about done. Update soon, please.
Peace
Aura
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