(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-03-05Do you understand what you're doing to me? You're killing me. KILLING ME! Don't you remember, in the beginning, my murder plot? Hmmm? I know you do. So now what am I supposed to do with my rope, ice pick, two-by-four, and mace? Use it on Ville in my story? 'Cause it's gotta be used somehow. stares at you, really seriously Fine, like Sara. See what I care. crosses arms over chest I'm just gonna go kill Ville now. So, nah-nah-nah. laughs Just kidding! This is really great, though. Please update soon! UUUUPPPPDDDDDAAAAATTTTEEEE!!!!
gigglesnort...'Mr. FUCK'...walks off giggling
Author's responsenods Yes i remember, but steals the rope, ice pick, two-by-four and mace away from you I think maybe [just maybe] Ville is hurt enough, no??? I only like her a wee bit! does that finger and thumb measuring action thing for emphasis.........lol, I like Mr. Fuck; he's funny...but EVIL!!!! nods :)
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-03-05OMG, i know what you mean. bor-ing on this end too. there is actually interesting for me to do but write..so why haven't i??? i dunno. anyway, yeah, i am still confused, but sara is becoming less of a beotch. she's still bi-polar though, i say. and OMG! sally raped mikey! whore! :)
btw, i am completely OBSESSED with seeing MCR next month... when I say MCR I really mean GERARD and MCR. don't laugh. he's an addiction. lol!
enjoyed the update love!
Author's responselooks at you really really seriously Yeah, why haven't you???-lol :) You're seeing them next month?? jelous face cries but smiles cos i'm mature and selfless and can be happy for my fellow human beings! :):):) ah, yes; Gerard Way- the nicotine of my heart!! [not really sure where that came from; i don't even smoke?!!] well, merci pour le review love brightened ma day! :):):)
(#) lady_venom_x 2007-03-05First of all, wonderful chapter, as per usual from me. I really enjoy reading your stories.
Another thing. Now, this was barely noticeable, but I guess I know a lot about drugs (I don't do them, mind you..), but when you were listing off the date rape drugs, you put GBH instead of GHB. Also, I think in one of your previous chapters, you mentioned Sara tried to put a pill in Mikey's mouth. You spelled it "eccy", which I'm assuming, you meant Ecstasy. No harm, just something to watch out for.
But other than that, your content is marvelous. Just a few little errors :) Update soooooooooon. :)
Author's responseruns off to change it oops!, that was a mistake! But seriously, thank you for telling me it's very good of you. I changed it cos that's what it was supposed to say :). Yeah, i meant ecstasy, eccy's just slang (that may just be in Glasgow though? shrugs):) Once again, thank you; that was an incredibly helpful review! hugs
- So...she loves Mikey but went otu with Gee causing a serious mind fuck ('scuse me language) and now Mikey's being there fo her. Do you write eastenders or summot?
Author's responsewhen i'm not too busy writing Corrie...and Emmerdale...and River City...and Hollyoaks.....
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