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Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) xxBrinkaxx 2007-03-06
meannie
u make him stay in prison
but at the same time
id be too cliche for him to get out
and ur so not the cliche writer
thats wut i loveDance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) sing4me09 2007-03-06
how about this...
you write a sequel or I'll die...?
cause I will if you don't!Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) cnharp 2007-03-06
wow, that's really sad. I almost started crying for her. I can't wait to see what's next!!Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) trueLIEx3 2007-03-06
Seriously. You better write I sequel. I'll throw a fit. I HATE Ryan and Adam. Fuck them to hell. Amazing story, though. I wish he would've gotten out free. =(.Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-06
Wow. Speechless...
Very nicely done. Not sure if I want a sequel or not. Seems like she's been through enough, no? But if you do decide to write one, I'll def. read it! :) Oh, and this chap. deserves a rating point! Woo!Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) Geets 2007-03-07
is too shocked to say anything omg!! how could u leave it there?!?! u HAVE to write a sequel dude!! that was ace; ryan and adam suck like hell and brendon should get out!!!Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) panicatthediscoxchik 2007-03-07
oh my fucking gawd.. excuse my French-- BUT this fanfic/story was AMAZING!! I LOVED IT! srry I didn't comment each part.. I really wanted to read this story all in one day.. lol. AND I DID! But aww. thats so sad. Lovely story. I Love your writing style keep it up. It would be LOVELY if you made a sequel.. I'd definately read it!!! I have to admit- I cried-- alot--- near the end.. Poor Haylee and Brendon.. =( But all's good. Loved it! Keep up the awesome work!!Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) prissynblack 2007-03-11
OMG! I cant believe he stayed in prison. I was so wishing he got out. Dude this is one of my favorite fan fics I've read. I love this story please do a sequel! plz. pretty plz. with a cherry on top. Man this story is so good and your a awesome writer:)Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) xImRadx 2007-03-15
Okay so ya... I fucking hate your guts for what you did to me... haha. MAKING BRENDON STAY IN JAIL!!! HOW COULD YOU!!! Though, at the same time I fucking love you to death. AMAZING story. Really it is... poor Haylee, I was really hoping for her he'd get out. he was the only guy in her life that actually loved her. I really didnt expect him to have to go back... you shocked the hell outa me. BUT HE BETTER NOT STAY IN PRISON FOR THE SEQUAL!!!! Because theres gonna be one... oh there better be. Your such an amazing writer keep at it okay, this was one of my favorite stories.Author's response
thanks; im so glad that you liked it. i am planning out the sequeal for all those wondering. i really wanted to let brendon stay out, but i couldnt. that would have been too cliche; people would have expected it to happen. so im glad that it shocked you.Dance To This Beat && Hold A Lover Close
(#) xImRadx 2008-07-08
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please
Make a sequal to this.... it says in your bio if you want me to continue on something just ask her something like that. So Im asking... PPLLEEAASSEEEE SEQUAL!!!!!!
I apreciate it... thanks.
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