(#) midlifecrisi 2007-03-08Okay, calm down. I'm not insulting your posse. Not even implying that liking this makes them dumb or stupid. (Although a core group of them act pretty mindless at times) I'm saying that by pissing and moaning about your ratings, you know full well that they will use their points to "fix" them so they suit you all. That's false. By constantly commenting on them (the ratings), you have obviously waved a red flag at the people who like nothing better than to trash others ratings. STOP commenting and they will go somewhere else. No, I am not one of them. I'm reveiwing, not rating. I'm trying to help you understand. Unfortunately, you don't. The point is take a couple of extra minutes and proofread. It will make the story more enjoyable for everyone. Learn from your critics, even if you find them insulting. They might just have something important to say....or not. This total trashing of anyone who isn't on the Alexsandee for queen bandwagon should really stop. Opinions are like a**holes, everyone has one. Some agree with your stance, some don't; but everyone is entitled to one. I'm trying so hard to get through to you because I see such potential and such easily fixed errors.
(#) KitsuneRei 2007-03-08Hi Kitsune here ive been reading the story since Chapter 77 and cant stop!!!
all i have to say is AWESOME!!! Gee is SOOOOO dirty. But why doesnt Torosaurus have a girlfriend??? everyone else has either a girlfriend or a fiance and poor Ray is all alone. still gotta love the story.
Author's responseOK, if you remember the guys think Ray has someone but he hasn't admitted it yet. Don't want to spoil anything but don't worry about Ray being alone.
(#) street-howitzer 2007-03-10Thank you for going through and appropriately rating your story's chapters. It was both mature and appropriate to do. To be honest, I didn't think that you would actually do it, but I'm glad to see you chose to do the right thing.
Author's responseTo be honest, I find it disturbing that you didn't think I would add the warnings. You don't know me; you don't know anything about me. So why the preconceived opinion of my character? As for being mature, you have no idea how mature I am.
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