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Guardian
(#) Nessrox444 2007-03-10
It's a good story and I hope you write more. There is one way you can improve it though, spacing. Everytime you indent and everytime someone new talks you should put a space in front of it (an enter space not a spacebar space) other than that I saw few problems. Keep up the good work ^_^
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