Part 4 In which Molly reunites with her friends in a series of vignettes. Also in which Molly and Patrick finally have their first real conversation without any interruptions or dramatics in almos...
(#) danceislife 2007-03-11sorry I'm impatient. It's like waiting for a new episode for a tv show or something. You are my new favorite novel, and I'm sad I don't get to read all of it at once. I'll be more patient this time, I promise. Basically when you hadn't updated in like a week I wanted to make sure you didn't die. That would be sad. VERY sad. Sounds like work is going well though, just very busy. I hope you are liking it as much as you seemed to at the beginning. Okay this is far too long, so um, yeah.
(#) danceislife 2007-03-11ps. You do "happier" chapters like this, and in the back of my mind, the beginning shouts in my head "she's not going to be happy!" Ah, it's a torment.
Author's response...you thought this was happier? wow. ok. I guess that's good. I thought it was depressing.
- You know, FicWad refuses to send me an email when you update. Those bastards. Anywho, Molly is making some progress, that's good. But I have a feeling things are going to get a lot worse before it gets better. And I heart Patrick's mom. She's adorable. I want one. But I'm having some issues with Patty Cakes right now. He'll come around. This I know. Pointage, my dear.
Author's responseyea I have that same problem w/ Alex's stories. you STILL have issues w/ Pattycakes? I thought for once I had him handle things in a mature and adult manner. damn. lol
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-14I'm sorry I am so late with reading. I'm sorry I'm mostly a no-show on both ficwad and buzznet these days... The reason is life's a bitch and so am I.
Now on to more important things:
The beginning of this chapter with the one line describing what happened and then a mini-conversation between Molly and one of her friends/ the shrink was super! I love that technique. Kudos!
My heart broke when Patrick told her that he couldn't take her back in his room. And then you put it right back together and made it pound furiously when he came to see Molly in her room and told her he was still in love with her and things weren't completely hopeless. :)
Oh... snd I think Patrick's mom is creepy. ;)
Author's responseMiss Alex!?!?! is it really you?!
I hope everything's okie dokie over on the other side of the big puddle. You're not a bitch. at all.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm gonna try to work on some more tonight..if I have 5 minutes. It took a while to write 'cause I couldn't get the tone right--but I guess based on this I managed to pull off what I was going for.
Patrick's a stupid boy. like whoa. He does stuff like toss girls hearts around and stomp them into itty bitty pieces and then slaps some crazy glue on them and hopes it sticks.
Patrick's mom creepy? you think? hmm...not what I was going for. Might need to work on that.
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