Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Subject to Change
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Subject to Change
(#) duckapple 2007-03-15
Its good.
The only thing I see, which really is just a pet peeve of mine, is the POV marker. My suggestion:
Skip a line.
Pete
Skip a line.
Start his point of view text.
:)
But you don't have to listen to me, I don't know much anyway.
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