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* Earth to Bella *
(#) cnharp 2007-03-16
nice, i liked it...well, keep up the awesome work and i can't wait for an update. i really hope everything works out for them!!!* Earth to Bella *
(#) cnharp 2007-03-16
nice, i liked it...well, keep up the awesome work and i can't wait for an update. i really hope everything works out for them!!!* Earth to Bella *
(#) violent_kiss 2007-03-16
:O.
woah. that was one hell of a chapter. heres looking forward to more.Author's response
I like the way you put it! haha* Earth to Bella *
(#) iLUVjeffreestar 2007-03-16
i love this story!
please contuine!
i wish i was the one under pete...when he was doing all that close your eyes and fell it...AMAZING!Author's response
haha!!
XD
Really? haha* Earth to Bella *
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-19
whoa...
hey, careful with your spelling and stuff, you have great rhythm with your writing, sometimes it can be ruined for a reader if that's flawed by a huge spelling error, get someone to proof read or just re-read 2-3 times yourself before posting, that's what I do, and I still have 2-3 per chapter....rolls eyesAuthor's response
Gah!! I try to do that but when i'm posting i'm just so freaking exhausted that somethings just go by unnoticed. and I have no one to proof-read it for me. Forget that english is not my first language? O.O
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