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• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-21

  Ooo, the double standard...
  Man go out and work- important job. Woman stay home when man need woman. (Ok, just imagine that in your best caveman voice... yes, I AM pathetic)
  
  Anyway, this story is always so refreshing. I don't think I can explain why, but I really do love it!!! So take a point etc etc and go write more! :)

  Author's response

  Ah, you're back. I missed you and your reviews lady. And super-duper caveman impression. But I think I'm disturbed by my mental images of Joe as caveman. I am just SOOO wrong :-)
  

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) LOVELA 2007-03-21

  This chapter was amazing. I think you have outdone yourself. I love how this story has followed such realistic settings. It certainly rings true to real life, which makes it that much more enjoyable to read. Also, the Pete and Patrick scene was too cute.
  You deserve smooches and points fo sho.

  Author's response

  Thank you CC. You really make me feel better when I think my stories are going rapidly down hill.My smooches right back at ys :-)

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) JokeMeKisses 2007-03-21

  So i remember reading most of this story in one sitting. I was so excited to find something that flowed so naturally. And then I'm not sure what happened, I just realized I missed the last three chapters. That were absolutely amazing though! The holidays were perfect, and the arguments between Joe and Megan showed how real their relationship is. A lot of stories (including my own) focus too much on the getting into the relationship and not too much on maintaining it. That's just another big plus of your story. Plus a point because I love your writing, I love this story, and I love Joe. End. : )

  Author's response

  I got a little excited and posted three in like a week :-) Thank you for the wonderful review. It brought a huge smile to my face. xx

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) Tawney 2007-03-22

  Ack! No! Turmoil in the relationship! I have a bad feeling about it i tell you.
  
  Yey for updating though! XX

  Author's response

  Yeah, everyhting was just getting too picture perfect. You knew it couldn't last, right? Haha. Thank you for r+r lady xx

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) sing4me09 2007-03-22

  awww..poor Joe

  Author's response

  Yes indeed. Megan is being a bit of a bitch. Can anyone say PMS?

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) Frenchie189 2007-03-22

  Ooh, I knew their relationship would get bumpy..
  
  Update soon please.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) Frenchie189 2007-03-22

  Ooh, I knew their relationship would get bumpy..
  
  Update soon please.

  Author's response

  I promise I will, there's definitely some drama in the offing..... x

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-03-22

  niiiiice joe. real nice. ;)

  Author's response

  The Joefro dumbness rears it's ugly head :-)

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-22

  "Spill it Joe. You are driving me crazy with the mood swings. You're worse than a girl," Pete threw down his spoon, challenging me. -> This is a perfect example for whenever you have to explain the word “ironic”. ;)
  
  Patrick and Pete’s “advice” section was giggle-worthy, dearie.
  
  Ha ha, that last part was awesome. Female bitchiness & male bluffing. ;)
  
  Sorry for being so horribly late to review. I can’t even give you a point… BUT! I can give you two Austrian thumbs up. (And a stupid Austrian grin…)

  Author's response

  What? You mean irony isn't like a black fly in your chardonnay??? ;-) The stupis grin makes my day, lady. Hugs back at you xx

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-03-25

  / Band playing tonight? Sorry, I have to work. "I'll make it up to you."
  
  Date planned? Sorry, study group over-ran. "I'll make it up to you."
  
  I miss you, I haven't seen you for days? Sorry, Carolyn broke up with her latest loser boyfriend and she needs me. "I'll make it up to you."/ Thrice Thrice Thrice! Great!
  
  They both shifted uncomfortably in their seats. I really do love those dorks….
  
  Yeah, you're asking the wrong people, Joe," he finally acknowledged. HAHAHHAHAHA!
  
  I’m uber sad at the ending of this chapter, I’m reading on to 16 now, You better make this OK or I’ll beat ya.

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