- Aha!! I tracked you down yet again. I think I took a bit to come back here to find you, though.
Just as good as the first(second, third, nth) time I read it. Though you still missed a few spelling errors. Silly site hides the story from me while I review, so I can't just give them to you. Might email it later...
Anyway, very glad to see you are continuing to share your glorious works with those outside of TFF. Will be looking forward to more 'published' works. Until next time.
(#) lord_phoenix 2007-05-06Great story m8!
I read the rest of your work in TFF and this is,as expected,as good as the rest!
I am greatly impressed by how original the stories are(except the name nagi appearing almost everywhere :P)despite their great number...and that is saying something in such an enormous fandom...
Please keep up the good work(no need to rush it though..genius takes time)
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