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• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) duckapple 2007-03-25

  I adore you Katy.
  Just so you know.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) riaryder 2007-03-25

  Humour - yeah that told 'em. We got there with the unnecesary vowels first!
  
  And I love how Petra is totally falling for Patrick even though she seems to know nothing about him. It is totally understandable.
  
  And that Katy girl (based on anyone we know??) actually seems likeable, which is unusual for ex's in FOB fiction. Which makes me think there's some Patrick-at-faultness in their breakup. Uh-oh, that could be trouble!
  Your Patrick just makes me melt, though. His adorableness just oozes from this story.
  Great work.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) LOVELA 2007-03-25

  Oh, this was so fabulous! I think I smiled through the entire chapter. I, of course, adore Patrick and you make him soooo adoreable in this story even though I have a feeling that faults will be coming out. The ex is quite a spit fire. Hmmm...I wonder if she is based off of anyone that we know? Dax is the best dog ever! How cute is he? I still want him, but don't tell Alex :) Again, you out did yourself. This story is uberfab. SMOOCHES!

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-25

  love love love it; nervous to see patricks fault come crashing down, but can't wait to see what happens.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-26

  Ooo, an ex in the picture... Petra and Patrick are just too cute btw.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) luckysgc921 2007-03-26

  i love it. i love you. i love petra. i love patrick. i love katy. i don't love blood and boo-boo's but hey it lead to kissies...sort of.
  keep it up. have a point.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-29

  wow i just suprise myself when i realized that i didn't review this chapter - shame on me.
  you know i am in love with this story so why beat the dead horse right?
  an ex girlfriend - thats interesting - i usually don't like those but she seems relatively harmless so we'll see how this goes.
  hopefully patrick wasn't as much as a dumbass as i'm thinking he was.
  as usual, you rock my world.
  pointsss.
  xxxo.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-29

  wow i just suprise myself when i realized that i didn't review this chapter - shame on me.
  you know i am in love with this story so why beat the dead horse right?
  an ex girlfriend - thats interesting - i usually don't like those but she seems relatively harmless so we'll see how this goes.
  hopefully patrick wasn't as much as a dumbass as i'm thinking he was.
  as usual, you rock my world.
  pointsss.
  xxxo.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-29

  wow i just suprise myself when i realized that i didn't review this chapter - shame on me.
  you know i am in love with this story so why beat the dead horse right?
  an ex girlfriend - thats interesting - i usually don't like those but she seems relatively harmless so we'll see how this goes.
  hopefully patrick wasn't as much as a dumbass as i'm thinking he was.
  as usual, you rock my world.
  pointsss.
  xxxo.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-29

  ok so yeah, i def. have an obnoxious amount of reviews all because my computer hates me - i kind of feel dumb now.
  lol.
  gross.

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