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Seventeen.
10 reviewsSorry this took so long - please forgive me - i am at the mercy of your kindness. lol ok i should be shot for being a dork. also this chapter was made possible by Melissa who rules my motherfucking...
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We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) Melim 2007-03-26
I rule your life? I think that just made my day. And even though I was no help for the nickname part, I think the rest of the chapter came along quite nicely. And I'm very excited for the rest of the story...even though I know what happens already.Author's response
YAY i'm glad i made your day - and you made mine as i pestered you for help as you tried so hard not to suck at math homework.
:)
p.s. i knew you loved me the minute you washed my hair in the sink.
xxxo.We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-26
i cant believe shes being so ridiculous about this entire situation. but either way; it was worth the wait, i love this story.Author's response
she has her reasons . . . :)We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-26
Ok, time to make a hitlist... I'm thinking on it we need to include Amy, Stump Club girl, and Megan (yes, from your other story)... for Patrick's I can already see that Mr. Felix will be ranked number one. (Ok, not a REAL hitlist... I don't want anyone to get all emotional and send a bomb squad out to my house or anything... totally fictionsl hitlist for fictional characters).
Anyway, poor Fiona. There has to be more to this story in understanding why she is so upset over the entire thing. She is being a little over the top with freaking out over it so my guess is that something happened to someone she knows (like her mom or something)and the father didn't follow through really screwing up the family. Am I right??? (Ok, you can tell me if I'm wrong, I'm tough like that.)
Sooo... Patrick is too cute. I have to kind of be on his side right now because he's having a completely normal reaction. Fiona needs to realize that as well (as Patrick needs to acknowledge that it COULD be his) and they both have some growing to do. They need to be more understanding... yeah, that's what I'm looking for. But oh well, it's completely pointless to counsel fake people... haha, but wouldn't it be cool if they were real? lol... well, no I guess it wouldn't since I just made a hitlist. I could get into trouble then.
And this addition of Fiona's father into the mix is quite interesting. I really do love this story. It is one of my all time favorites and I get sooooo excited every time I see you've updated. So update all the time!!! (You know, so I spend MORE time reading on here and not doing my homework)
Points Points Points... You completely Rock, Alex!Author's response
lol a hitlist sounds fantastic actually - (see i now diverted the FBI attention from you to me, just as planned)
and you know there is always hidden secrets and stories awaiting to unfold, lol, so no worries there.
and yay for Patrick's side, usualy he gets his chops busted lol but i'm glad that he's recieving love in this story for being adorable.
lol, you know i live for your essay reviews Gwen you rock my world.
yay for points!!!We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-27
UH!-Mazing.
Brilliant writing, the dialogue es perfecto! Esoty Feliz! Muy Feliz! YAY!
But the story is sad yo, so that is sad but I love reading good good writing, it makes me smile so much...
Great job!Author's response
i'm glad i make you smile because you smiling equals me smiling and thats fun times.
:)We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-27
I had to read the previous chapter because I had forgotten. I was still in 'Memory Lane' mode. LOL. But, don't worry about not posting in a while for this. I'm def. not disappointed in this chapter. It was really great. I think my favorite part is when Patrick pretty much blurts out that he took Fiona's virginity in front of her father. F'ing pricless. gets excited for next chapter You are seriously one of my favorite authors! No lie. :DAuthor's response
Ahh 'Memory Lane' mode - that made me smile. And i am so freaking glad that you found that funny when he blurted out all that shiz in front of her daddy, i like to throw in things i think are funny and i always get exctied when people call it out. ahhh you make me happy inside.We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) BurlesqueQueen 2007-03-27
Muy, muy buena.
Am I pissing you off with the crap spanish translation? Cos I'm pissing me off.
In Scottish that translates as ya wee dancer!!
Trust me whaen I say that's good xxxxxxAuthor's response
I love your spanish translations - and yay for good things in scottish.
:)
xxxo.We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) riaryder 2007-03-28
Oh,no. How embarrassing is that?
That Scott guy is going to be trouble. What as ass!
"Chill out, he is so many kinds of bigger than you" Great line. Seriously
I love this story loads. Have one of my pointsAuthor's response
Yay for points. lol. and yes i up-ed the embarassing factor times 10 just to make the story a little bit more light hearted then what it really is.
:)
xxo.We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) fob4ever 2007-03-28
hahaah. awkwarddddd. i love it! thats totally classic.We'll Make Them So Jealous.
(#) dflip07 2007-07-16
i agree with patricksgirl. please update soon! you're such an amazing writer! ;]
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