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Chapter Thirteen
2 reviewsLulu and Cid's relationship deepens when they have a chance to speak to each other in private for the first time in days.
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Drawn Toward Unity
(#) helluin 2007-03-30
Oh, this is my favorite chapter so far. I was thinking you might still have some awkwardness between Lulu and Cid after that last difficult conversation, but I like the flow of this one. You covered so much ground without making it wander! Little tiny tiny tiny touches showing how they're becoming more comfortable together, and a few dollops of humor thrown in. (Rikku's comment about the shower made me laugh aloud when I plugged it into the translator). Cid's frank grumble at the end sounds about right for him.
You managed to pull off the standard h/c scene without making it contrived. I envy you. ;)
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