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Nine - Cry Me A River.
11 reviewsOk you guys, this is serious, you have to take a deep breath and promise me that you won't hate me after you're done reading this. i love you all, good luck.
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(#) Melim 2007-03-29
Alright, so even though I know what's happening, this was still a little shocking, though written very well. Obviously Kate has her reasons for everything and we'll just have to wait for everything to clear itself up. But Alex, seriously, you're doing a great job, don't worry about it. And remember, it's all on schedule, and if not, we can fix it.
"Did we just pull one over on Walmart?"
"I believe we did."Author's response
thank you very much for making me feel better about myself - lol you knew how much i was freaking out over this chapter.
"I just ran over something crawling on the road!"
"Like a human?"
"Like a woodland CREATURE!"Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-29
OHMYGOSH! i dont even know what else to say .. my mouth is just stuck hanging open. i dont hate you but OHMYGOSH what is going on!? okay, im done spazzing out now, ill just sit contently and wait for more.
sits tight, contently waitingAuthor's response
ahhh, i breathe a sigh of relief - i'm glad that you are awaiting more instead of telling me to take a hike that you hate the way the story is going.
your review has made my day.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-29
Holy Hell!!!
What just happened? rereads to make sure she understands correctly Yep... got it in one. Sooo... That was way intense. Seriously. I think Joe is now my hero. I want to hug him and squeeze him. She DOES need to marry Joe because he's actually acting like a decent responsible human being while Patrick is getting walked all over by just about everyone.
Gosh, I could just kiss Joe right now... the car is in the garrage!!!
And even though this was a very emotional chapter, I was still extremely impressed with your ability to add a good bit of humor... ex. Patrick's song in his head. I think I smiled like an idiot at that one.
Ok, well, points are being tossed in your direction, sorry my review isn't all that exciting today, I think I've run out of creative juices. Anywho... very excited for more!!!Author's response
YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!
omg i was so worried that no one would like it and everyone would hate it and i would be cast into ficwad exile.
ughh your review is amazing, thank you so much for making me smile.
but Joe and Kate? really? weiiiird, but i dunno maybe it will happen.
:)
xxxoBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) danceislife 2007-03-29
BRILLIANT!!!! That was beautifully written. I definitely could see it!
"severally annoyed with the fact that he couldn't get 'Grillz' out of his fucking head" -SOOO FUNNY!
"The car is in the garage"- love this whole idea!
Why did Joe ask her to marry him? Weird, but okay... Patrick definitely deserved it. Maybe now he'll wake up and smell, er, Kate. lmao....Author's response
it was supposed to be strange and out of nowhere, so the fact that your mentally going 'wtf?' makes me smile.
thank you so much for all your love.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) danceislife 2007-03-29
In your response to GwenMerlon, you said Joe and Kate, with a maybe and a smiley face. I don't like that!! You scheming author you...Author's response
haha i have to keep you asking questions.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) cnharp 2007-03-29
'Kate Wentz is not to be touched by any members of the band not named Patrick Martin Stump' nice, someone is being posessive. welcome back asstrick! actually, now, i'm kind of mad at kate. she really did mess up this time. oh well, i can't wait for more, as always. tear, i'm not the first this time, i have been oober!!!! busy lately! oober!! LOL! maybe it's uber, rambling, anyways, what was i going to say, oh yeah, i love it still, and as always, keep up the amazing work and update soon!!! xo - cassiAuthor's response
as always you make me smile to the max.
i love your reviews.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) fob4ever 2007-03-29
omgoodness. :) that was very emotional. I love Joe!!! He just jumped in and was amazing!! (not that he usually isnt..but yah)I love the little humor you put in there. I'm not gonna lie, I giggled like once or twice...congrats. it takes alot for me to do that with a story. smiles cant wait for more updates and darammaa.Author's response
yes, thank you so much for reviewing. i like to throw humor in with my drama just so it's not so heavy. i'm glad you enjoyed it.
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(#) duckapple 2007-03-29
Lying is bad.
Characters never seem to learn that lesson.Author's response
lying is bad.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) EmoPoppins 2007-03-29
ahhhh Kate just keeps fucking herself overrrr lmaoooo...wow patrick...has become a douche...and Joe is the fucking maaaannnnnnnnn! keep writing...this story is amazingBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-29
Oh you did not...You did....But you couldn't have...
OK
breathes
Lemme get this straight - The car is in the garage??
Marriage?
Mrs Trohman
A Stump Bump?
Blood?
Fights?
Verbal Rape??
Door slamming????
Ok take you rating point and get the hell out of here you writing machine. I've had enough of your exciteable amazing, moving, wonderful writing. I deman you don't update until I catch mmyself up with this...
Wait, I'm all caught up
OK - UPDATE
NOW!Author's response
best review ever !!!! made me laugh continuiously (i butchered that word, whoops)but seriously you are amazing, you make me smile, and you rule the world.
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