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Forever Feels Like Home
(#) danceislife 2007-04-01
hahaha....That should scare himAuthor's response
I'm hoping he peed his pants.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-01
YEAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and that's seriously how it would go down if any one messes with my girl CeCe alrighty ho?? I rated ambience because Patrick was incredibly likeable ( in the sack ) in this chapter and there was ice cream - a whole gallon of it, y'know in britain, we don't even have that, we have pissy 1 litre packs of tiny tubs for the cost of a month's wage from the video shop.....So So Wrong.
CeCe, you are amazing, this really was an amazingly written chapter, the dialogue was precise and the flashback totally put us in the picture.
Thank you for being so awesome!Author's response
Awe, thanks Katy! You are seriously the reason why this story continues to get posted or else I would probably loose motivation quite quickly.
Thanks for the awesome review and I felt this story needed something more, so I put you and Crystal in it along with Alex. Now it should be perfect!
Smooches.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) fobgal1 2007-04-02
LOL. Pete deservers to be kicked in the balls, hard! Update soon please.Author's response
Yes, I agree.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) Cucumber 2007-04-02
It was well worth the wait.
But you can update more often, y'know.Author's response
I'm glad it was work the wait. I had some personally drama that had to do with an ER and a whole nights sleep lost, so this week had been spent catching up from that. I will try to post sooner the next time around, however.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) fob4ever 2007-04-02
good! that dick. :( great update. cant wait for more!Forever Feels Like Home
(#) riaryder 2007-04-05
Apologies for my lateness, lady. Ficwad just keeps crashing on me. Grrrrrr.
Beautifully written. Pete is such an asshole. You write asshole Pete sooo well.
And I'm back on team Patrick! Izzy needs to wake up and get herself some Biscuit lovin'. (Was at the FOB gig in Glasgow last night and he was just too cute for words. Yum)
My favourite part, though was the girly therapy. So true. So great.
Love it, love it, love it. Pointagefor defo. xxxxAuthor's response
No apologies needed. I've been having uber problems with Ficwad as well. The girl therapy part was my favorite to write! It is too true! Thanks for the lovely review and point!Forever Feels Like Home
(#) MMMramen 2007-04-07
I love me some DoJ cameos. Katy and Crystal are hilarious. Nice touch. Patrick is of course a saint. I like that he stood up to Pete, but still comforted Izzy. I so want them to end up together. But I feel bad for JB. He's been nothing short of amazing to Izzy/Bella. I think I'm getting too involved in this story. Take my point, you deserve it.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-07
After reading this chapter I am totally back in love with the Stumpster.
Am I horrible for finding it wonderful to read about how Izzy is torn between three men? Never is enough, I say...
Crystal & Katy were so perfect in this chapter. Nice capture of Her British Decency. ;)Author's response
I'm glad that you liked this chapter. I was a little not happy with it. But, how couldn't I be happy with it with the wonderfulness of the DoJ girls! You girls just make my story uber fab!
Thanks for the review darling! I miss your reviews!! SMOOCHES!!Forever Feels Like Home
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-04-09
they won't let me rate you. you're just too hot for this rater, nizard.
list?
1.)i love how izzy gets so pissed about JB using violence. it shows that she's not completely over her past, and although she's buried it rather deep, it's still there.
2.) JB is such a good guy. why did she sleep with pete? damn her. JB is soooo much better.
3.)/"Why are you always the one to come save me?" I asked enjoying the feeling of his body next to mine.
"Pete doesn't know what he's missing," Patrick said and kissed the back of my head./ are you kidding me? can you say "perfect"?
4.)okay. i'm in this story and i have ice cream. i don't think i've ever smiled wider in my life. i love katy in this story, by the way.
alright. i have to go now. grr. i will hopefully get back to this tomorrow.
i miss you, nizard!Author's response
I find it more than amusing that people are falling for JB. I feel like I should add some pictures of him, so they can get the full affect of this boy. Swoonage for shizzo. And I thought to myself that this story needed something more and you two girls were just the thing! Thanks for the inspiration of having such wonderful friends. You girls are wonderful!
Smooches from the Nizzard (Ninja/Wizzard) DOJoe :)
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