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in which the new and the old worlds collide. quite literally.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) MMMramen 2007-04-02
Ya know, I wasn't even going to log in until I saw that you updated. After I was done choking on my green tea, I hurried up and got to reading. That Rick son of a bitch. I'm glad Patrick tried to straighten that asshole out. But I think he only made it worse. Abusive guys tend to be quite intelligent and charming, so kudos on the real...ness of the character. And the women tend to think it isn't a big deal to get thrown around. Again, kudos on the realness. As usual, lovely chapter, my love. Don't be a stranger :)Author's response
sowwy kyle.
the idea of Patrick beating the ever loving crap out of him crossed my mind but at the same time...it seemed out of character.
Don't worry...Rick will get his--when Pete puts the pieces together. We all know HE'S the violent one.
and yea...I know all about prick's like Rick. trust me. Molly won't be dumb for too long.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-04-02
Okay so I got an email that you updated(because I just had to put you on my alerts:) ) and I squealed. You just made me squeal. Oi...Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-04-02
Emergency! at the Club...hahaha Have I told you lately that you are brilliant?
I personally loved this chapter. The best one in the past month I'd say. I'm not being sarcastic in that it's only the 3rd day of April, but this is my favorite since Molly's therapy session, because her therapist was crazy hilarious. Um, yeah, I really liked your use of words (ie. Steel in their voices). It really helped paint a cool visual for me. Therefore, rating point? I think so...Author's response
lol. my friend calls them that cause for some reason she can NOT remember "panic! at the disco".
I'm glad you liked it. everyone (cept me) seems to.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-03
Oh mIss Bridget - You are Incredible. I adored it, every single word......Author's response
ah but Miss Katy your incredibleness far exceeds my own.
glad you liked it darling. :)
more to follow...eventually. soon? i hope.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FallOutAimee 2007-04-03
OH MY GOODNESS ME....icky mean old rick....should die...imo XD but i liked patricks little 'chat' with him... now its petes turn to kick the living daylight outta him right!?!?! i hope so that would make me UBER happy
this update made me happy. =]]
i love every single chapter you have written so far so KEEEP it up :D:D update soon plz dont leave me hanging...lolWould You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-04-03
I'm so glad you're back!
I missed you lots.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Frenchie189 2007-04-05
Fuck, I hate this Rick person. He shall burn. LOL.
Update soon.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-07
Ach... this was one of my personal favorite chapters of yours! No lie.
1) The new boyfriend's name is Patrick too.
2) He's an abusive prick.
3) The REAL Patrick beats the fucker up. (Kinda.)
... Reasons to worship this chapter. Seriously.
... I missed your writing. And I can only blame myself.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-04-09
so i've finally had a chance to catch up, and wow. i love that this story is broken down into parts. i love that molly is so complex and so easy to relate to that you can't help but have a love/hate relationship for her character. i'm not sure how big you are on shameless flattery, so i'm going to end this now. but super kudos. this is amazing, and i'm pretty sure this review isn't really capturing how amazing it is.
oh, and sorry for not reviewing every chapter. i did go through and rate them, though.
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