(#) luckysgc921 2007-04-06Miss Katy you are pure genius. i adore this story so much. and Now i really want to know what happened to Petra. ANd Patrick is being a stupid head...a "trying to care" and adorable stupid head...but a stupid head none the less (although he IS male so i guess its expected)
loves this story.
- Oh Katykatykaty! This update was spectacular. I wish I could be as motivated as you, but we've got subzero temps here and all I want to do is sleep. So that's what I've been doing. Enough of my ramblings and on with the review. I LOVE Petra's character. I think her feelings are very validated with being upset with Patrick putting her in her place. And Patrick is VERY male in this story. Again...it makes it very real to life. You are doing such a great job with this! I love the suspense you are leaving us all in with both main characters and their past relationships. You are a phenomenal person. I loves you! SMOOCHES and POINTS!
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-14"What do you mean you got nothing out of our relationship - what the f* did you want, a medal?" -> Since I don’t have Petra’s golden heart, I giggled at this one. Caustic Patrick is so good for meeeee…
Arg… the conversation about the sneaking around in his room was so adorable. sighs
Ha ha ha… Patrick needs to be getting some. Ok… actually… I am not surprised.
I aways use protection, silly. Always when I go out. I am too fair-skinned to be in the sun without protection.
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-21haha wet deams make me laugh - for the second before i knew it was a dream i was really excited for them though - its only a matter of time before thier time comes and i wish they would both see that. lol.
gereat job katy and i'm sorry for being so late to reviewing, hopefully there are still some good things left so i can rate you as AMAZING - lol or you know something less cool (since amazing isn't an option) exciting, moving, MAGICAL.
ok i'm done now.
Author's responsewow, i'm a little humbled by that. xx
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-06I realize now that I never elaborated on "I really like this concept." So:
It's a very interesting plotline, because you get to introduce the characters to one another as you introduce them to your audience. So not only are you a genius, conceptually, you are also pretty flipping savvy.
Also, the idea of Petra's secret past builds great tension, the idea that Petra and Patrick might one day grow to love one another pulls people in, and one liners [like the one I mentioned in my previous review] keep the story from being too dark.
In short, you are a genius [haw many times have I used that word thus far?], I love this story, I love all your stories actually, I love you, and apparently I love commas.
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