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Chapter 5 - He's A Rockstar, She's a Fallen Star.
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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) duckapple 2007-04-06
Yay.
I really don't know what else to say.
Other than the wet dream made me giggle.
A lot.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-06
haha, i love it. it took a while, but it was worth it. keep up the good work.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-04-06
Sooo I just read the entire story thus far and I must say that I'm really enjoying it =)
I love the quirkiness you have created between Patrick and Petra...very cute!
Love it..more please soon!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) luckysgc921 2007-04-06
Miss Katy you are pure genius. i adore this story so much. and Now i really want to know what happened to Petra. ANd Patrick is being a stupid head...a "trying to care" and adorable stupid head...but a stupid head none the less (although he IS male so i guess its expected)
loves this story.
pointage.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-06
Oh Katykatykaty! This update was spectacular. I wish I could be as motivated as you, but we've got subzero temps here and all I want to do is sleep. So that's what I've been doing. Enough of my ramblings and on with the review. I LOVE Petra's character. I think her feelings are very validated with being upset with Patrick putting her in her place. And Patrick is VERY male in this story. Again...it makes it very real to life. You are doing such a great job with this! I love the suspense you are leaving us all in with both main characters and their past relationships. You are a phenomenal person. I loves you! SMOOCHES and POINTS!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) riaryder 2007-04-09
Words seem to have deserted me in the last few days. So Im just going to tell you it's really great and offer points and hugs xxMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-14
"What do you mean you got nothing out of our relationship - what the f* did you want, a medal?" -> Since I don’t have Petra’s golden heart, I giggled at this one. Caustic Patrick is so good for meeeee…
Arg… the conversation about the sneaking around in his room was so adorable. sighs
Ha ha ha… Patrick needs to be getting some. Ok… actually… I am not surprised.
I aways use protection, silly. Always when I go out. I am too fair-skinned to be in the sun without protection.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-21
haha wet deams make me laugh - for the second before i knew it was a dream i was really excited for them though - its only a matter of time before thier time comes and i wish they would both see that. lol.
gereat job katy and i'm sorry for being so late to reviewing, hopefully there are still some good things left so i can rate you as AMAZING - lol or you know something less cool (since amazing isn't an option) exciting, moving, MAGICAL.
ok i'm done now.
lol.
xxo.Author's response
wow, i'm a little humbled by that. xxMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-11
"what the f* did you want, a medal?" is hilarious. i really hope that line sticks with me so i can use it next time i dump somebody.
i really like this concept.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-06
I realize now that I never elaborated on "I really like this concept." So:
It's a very interesting plotline, because you get to introduce the characters to one another as you introduce them to your audience. So not only are you a genius, conceptually, you are also pretty flipping savvy.
Also, the idea of Petra's secret past builds great tension, the idea that Petra and Patrick might one day grow to love one another pulls people in, and one liners [like the one I mentioned in my previous review] keep the story from being too dark.
In short, you are a genius [haw many times have I used that word thus far?], I love this story, I love all your stories actually, I love you, and apparently I love commas.
xox
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