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Chapter five: A Beckoning Battle (Part one)
4 reviewsIt pretty much involves battles between the teens...
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All Thanks to a Vision
(#) iheartyou07 2007-04-10
wow, i was surprised at Theresa's outburtst! But the whole her coming up to Neil and threatening to break his nail thing was HILARIOUS, very well done. You've really nailed these characters which is great, as most people don't. It wasn't boring, don't worry, but I'm glad to hear they'll be more drama to come! Yay! lol, awesome chapter, can't wait for more! Update soon!
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Thanks so much, gives iheartyou07 a hug I really appreciate you taking the time at reviewing my story. And thanks for recognizing the charactere build up that I strive to perfect!I'm saying this 'cause my story is getting less'n'less hits at every chapter I put up, so anywayz, thanks for reviewing!
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(#) CompetiveSwimmaChick 2007-04-10
OMG... that ROCKED! Raise the roof here! Oh yah! That was amazingly awesome in every possible way! I luved it SOOOOOO much..... this is such a fav story of mine! gives massive hug I'm so excited for the next chappie! dances around computer in mass joy That was gr8(great)!!!! If you don't post the next chappie soon I might die of suspense here! And you wouldn't want that to happen, right? gives puppy dog eyes Oh yah! WOOT! Jeepers (yes, you know you luv the word) what will happen next? Da Da Da Dun (my crappie climax music) I am so pumped for the next chappie! So please hurry with the updatetion (lmao... that's not a word is it?) LUV YA!
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P.S - if you need any help with my slang just say so and I'll translate it to proper english
P.P.S - and yes, I'm on a sugar high off easter chocolate! WOOT! Luv ya!All Thanks to a Vision
(#) CompetiveSwimmaChick 2007-04-10
Oh, and I just rated it MOVING! Don't mater about reviews, loads of peeps read but don't review. Ya story is awesome!All Thanks to a Vision
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2007-04-11
See, reviews DO come. OO! I like the tension between T/A/A. Very nice concept. And theresa seems.... nice? If THAT is what she is. Wish I could give you a longer review, but I have to go to school, -_- joyous. Nice work. -Nuuoa
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