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Chapter 74
1 reviewThis is the one thing that Darth Sidious never saw coming: a minor incident of collateral damage with repercussions that can potentially utterly unmake all of his schemes and reshape the whole of t...
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You Became to Me (this is the working title, please note!)
(#) SerpentClara 2007-04-12
I love this story, but could you please write in shorter paragraphs? Long paragraphs are really hard to read on a computer screen. To avoid causing sore eyes and dizziness in your readers, it's best to make your paragraphs no more than 3 to 5 (max) sentences long
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