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• Love Has No Age

  (#) rdgale2000 2007-09-21

  I have been very pleased with the pacing of this story.
  
  I look forward to your next chapter.
  
  Rick

• Love Has No Age

  (#) OniGanon 2007-09-22

  Definitely. Definitely. Definitely. Definitely. DEFINITELY. DEFINITELY. DEFINITELY.
  
  def·i·nite·ly ˈdɛfənɪtli
  –adverb
  1.in a definite manner; unambiguously.
  2.unequivocally; positively.
  –interjection
  3.(used to express complete agreement or strong affirmation):
  "Are you starting your diet tomorrow?"
  "Definitely!"
  
  —Synonyms 1. See clearly. 2. absolutely, certainly.
  
  DEFINITELY!

  Author's response

  I just can't seem to get that word right but its my problem.
  
  Thanks for the fulsome definition but I was well aware of it I just can't spell it!
  
  Will will try and update what has been posted thank you for pointing it out.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2007-10-23

  I've been reading this story and really enjoying it. Your pacing is good, the action is exciting and some of your scenes are very thrilling.
  For example, the lead up to the attack on Amelia and Susan had me very worried that Susan was going to get captured, and then the waiting for Harry to rescue her.....
  Also the scene where Hermione is walking around in town alone had me very worried for her.
  
  However, here comes the critism part. You use the wrong words extremely often. Her for him or He for her, and "and" gets used for "an" "on" "hand" -- all things that don't get caught by the spell checker. (Another that I saw a number of times was "will" for "we'll" but that's disappeared after a few chapters).
  
  Anyway, you might want to get a beta or do some more re-reads before posting. This are hard errors to see if you "know" what you're reading.
  
  Good luck with it! Very enjoyable. Thanks for writing this.
  
  Tom A.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the comments. Your right there are very hard for me to pick up. I try and get as meen as I can but as you can see some still slip through.
  
  I do have a Beta reader at the moment and he's doing great in helping me along but even with two eyes we miss things like this.
  
  So until they come up with a programme that can do it for me I'll do my best which is all that I can do.
  
  Thanks for taking the time and writting these comments.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) c3markh 2007-12-21

  Love the story but has something happened to your last chapter; it does not have any words displaing.

  Author's response

  There seemed to be a problem when I uploaded on friday. I've done it again and all now seems fine.
  
  Cheers for the commetns anyway.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) Eewec 2007-12-21

  Chapter 27 seems to have an incorrect link to it. I'm getting the main Ficwad page when I click it.

  Author's response

  There seemed to be a problem when I uploaded on friday. I've done it again and all now seems fine.
  
  Cheers for the commetns anyway.
  
  Easysurfing
  
  There seemed to be a problem when I uploaded on friday. I've done it again and all now seems fine.
  
  Cheers for the commetns anyway.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) snowy123 2007-12-24

  Can u repost chapter 27 plz, its not opening for some reason. The fic is nicely paced but i tink you can go a little faster now....

  Author's response

  There seemed to be a problem when I uploaded on friday. I've done it again and all now seems fine.
  
  Cheers for the commetns anyway.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) Z3US 2007-12-25

  Nice one :)
  
  
  go like that, but check your spelling and grammar ;)
  
  
  --> post more of it :) and soon ;)

  Author's response

  We are trying our best, but I'm glad that you are enjoying it.
  
  Thanks
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) stnssydny 2008-01-16

  I was just wondering when the real good stuff will be starting?

  Author's response

  You only have one chapter to wait.
  
  Cheers for your review though.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) odepotmike 2008-01-23

  I really find myself looking forward to this story. I do wish it would strt moving along though

  Author's response

  Pace is something taht I have found dificult to judge but you should see it start up a bit quicker now!
  
  Thank you for your comments.
  
  Easysurfing

• Love Has No Age

  (#) KYUUBI08 2008-03-28

  umm, yeah....what can i say...you make me believe the way the story flows. its really well paced, and its leaving me waiting in anticipation. the only down side, and this is basically the only complaint anyone has for it is grammar and spelling. if you could get someone from one of the bigger fanfiction sites to beta read it, they will. if you need someone to help beta read and keep an eye ot for errors, i'll be happy to help....that, and get a sneak peak at the story. anywho, cheers ^_^

  Author's response

  Thanks for your comments and offer.
  
  I have sent you an Email.
  
  Cheers
  
  Easysurfing

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