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Love Has No Age
Harry is told that he has the power of Love? With the help of a Gabrielle, Ginny and a few others he learns exactly what this means! Post -OOTP
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Love Has No Age
(#) Magic8888 2008-05-20
Very interesting story. Enjoy use of minor HP (Gabrille) and new characters.Author's response
I'm glad you seemed to like it and hope you continue to stay and give your reviews and sugestions.
I'm always open to help or sugestions.
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(#) marshall88 2008-11-21
love this story bUt draco scares the shit out of me lolololol PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET HIM RAPE HER ( SHE'S ONLY 11 MAN LOOK IN YOUR HEART 11) PLEASEAuthor's response
Thank you for your comments. It's a nice plea but as you can imagine I can't answer it, sorry.
All I can say is by the end of the next chapter you should have your answer one way or the other.
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(#) davidg2006 2009-01-11
Good God that was a slog!
53 chapters read over 4 days. 440000+ words before the first kiss between Harry and Gabrielle - talk about drawing something out - it was agonising!
You might also consider booking Harry into the hospital wing at some point - it appears he's suffering from a complete loss of spine! Doormat Harry is not something I enjoy.
Half a million words of Harry basically saying "woe is me".Author's response
Thank you for your commetns. It is nice to see someone post them. I understadn what you are saying but I still see Harry is still very much a shy teenager, but I note your points.
Cheers
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) fireblake 2009-04-01
I have only discovered this story recently, but I have become a fan of the plot, and I look forward to reading more as soon as possable. I wish there was a way to be notified as soon as an update is posted, cause I can not wait for the next one.... thank you and keep writing, you are doing great!!!!!!Author's response
Thank you for your review.
I try and update every two weeks now, but you should be able to add the story as an alert.
I think the system is still working, if it is you will get a mail when I update. Have a look at the bottom of the chapter list to see the link.
Cheers
EasysurfingLove Has No Age
(#) seebaer525 2009-05-15
This is easily one of my all time favorite fan fiction story. Keep up the good work.Author's response
Thank you for your reviews. I'm glad that you are enjoying it. I am having a little problems writting at the moment but hope to get the next chapter done soon which will allow me to upload the next one.
Sorry to keep you waiting.
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(#) Godogma 2009-06-08
Honestly I'm unwilling to work my way through the dross to reach any sort of point of interest in this story. You can set up a word filter to replace defiantly with definitely in most any Word Processor with four menu clicks, and if you'd actually wait a few days for your brain to untangle then reread your chapters you'd catch most of the blatant word errors yourself without needing a beta. I know just how difficult it is to catch them when in your mind you typed it correctly - your eyes gloss over them and you move on. If you wait a few days you'll generally catch the errors you missed before.
It begins interestingly enough, however by the second chapter Harry becomes even more of a doormat than he was in the previous books in canon.
Frankly, you've followed many other authors in the arena of emo bullshit Harry - honestly, an abused child has to learn how to survive or become broken well before the summer of Harry's fifth year. Honestly, you expect Dumbledore to have told Petunia of all people about all the ramifications of the blood protection or Voldemort? Especially when the protection is more for them than for Harry in the first place?
He gets 3 months of the year, they get 9. Also, the vaunted "Blood Protection" would have been rendered thoroughly useless if it was anything other than a misdirection and attempt at security through obfuscation in the first place. Mifalda Hopkirk keeps records I'm sure, and EVERY person on the Wizengamot heard exactly where Harry lived in the summer when he was on trial.
I'm sorry, I just can't reread any more stories that start with just this sort of emo bullshit and flawed logic anymore - I'm offering logical advice on how to improve your writing and move away from the cliche.
If you want to write a soap opera I suppose you started quite well, I can't stand that sort of drivel either. I've read the other reviews, and 440,000 words to get between point a and point b of a story is really far to verbose if you expect to keep an audience of more than a few viewers. Most novels are a mere 60-70k words for a reason, you have a story the length of 6 full length novels before the first kiss of one of the premier characters in your pairing...
In closing, I'm glad someone likes it and more power to whoever can make it through the first few chapters - it just isn't for me.Author's response
Thank you for your comments. I do not agree with them all but each person is allowed to have their own interpretation of the books.
As for your other tips, I thank you. It is nothing I have not already tried but at least you thought of something. Being dyslexic just means that no matter how many times I re-read I can not see the errors, ever. That was my resoning for asking for help. But thank you for trying to be helpful.
Hope you find the type of story you are after, I just like long stories so that is what I write.
Cheers
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(#) TWISTED-M_F 2009-08-23
I love your Stryker and can't wait for the next chapter. But please tell me that your not gonna kill of Gabrielle. I love character for here love and devotion. She is 100% love and that's all she wants. Who couldn't like her. Please let her live.Love Has No Age
(#) TWISTED-M_F 2009-08-23
Sorry for the miss spell. I love your storyAuthor's response
Thank you for your kind words. I know hoe you feel about Gabrielle an I'm the same. If I said that she would not die it could spoil it for others as there is little to no suspense.
If you want an exact anser mail me but here I can not confirm or deny that she will or will not survive.
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(#) dragonbreath 2010-01-07
I absolutely love the awkward romance and emotional conflict between characters, but I may have to volunteer to spell check and grammar.
In fact I may beg to beta just to get the next chapter.... my motives are purely professional you understand :)Author's response
Always on the look out for more help.
I know how you feel I've been there myself over some fiction that I have read.
If you want to contact me then leve me a mail.
easysurfing@hotmail.com
Cheers
Easysurfing
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