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Ino's and Shikamaru's decision
4 reviews[if you dont like ino/shika......DONT READ IT !!!!] Ino's mother, her stupid, stupid mother. why did she have to bring up the subject about finding the right boy.... and why did she have to bring ...
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Ino's and Shikamaru's decision
(#) pinkfroggie06 2007-04-14
The story was good. Even though it killed me to read a story about the Ino/Shika relationship. I firmly support the Temari Shikamaru relationship. But the story itself was really well written.
There is just one problem. You rated this story PG-13. And it has the warnigs rape and under-aged sex in in it...it sgould be rated R. And capitalize Shikamaru and Why in your summary.
But other than that you have a real talent for writing.
A piece of advice. For the people who jsut write things that don't help improve you writing (unless it' good of course) Screw them!!! Just a joke!!!
I wish you the best of luck!!!
Hugs and Kisses: Pinkfroggie06
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