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Holidays and Horrors
2 reviewsA Sixth year (pre-HBP) story: Harry decides the best way to fight back is to take the DA to the next level. He succeeds better than he thought he would. In this chapter,Christmas is celebrated, an...
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Dumbledore's Army
(#) brad 2007-04-15
I've always liked this chapter, for the H/L/Hr component, which of course you strengthen even more later (Luna's saying that Hermione must "know love, and later, children" always gets to me). So I liked very much the idea of the three having an intimate, non-sexual evening. Very nice.
Did you HAVE to come up with such a NAUSEOUS scheme of Voldemort's? Seriously, why did you imagine such an obnoxious spell? Surely you could have come up with something - anything! - else to move along Draco's eventual defection?
And in any case, isn't there a huge plot hole here? If I were Voldemort I would have found ten virgin couples to marry and conceive, not just rely on solely Draco.Author's response
Voldemort doesn't have ten pure-blood sets of virgins freely willing to go through the ceremony He's lucky he had one. And sorry, but Voldemort is a very bad man, and therefore does very bad things. And I doubt if anything less would have moved this Draco.
"T"
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