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Surreal
(#) darkangel666 2007-04-16
Omfg... this is such a good story im so into it its so great... please update soon!!Surreal
(#) darks00 2007-04-16
WOW I just love this story! It keeps getting better and better. I don't know who I feel more sorry for- De, for being such an idiot, or Julius, who basicly had his heart ripped out and still loves and cares about her.
Great job with emotions. Nicely done. Please update soon!
xxDarkness' KidxxSurreal
(#) vaiwandil 2007-04-17
great great great, there's no better word for it. You start with that wonderful shower-scene (already loved it in Casino Royale) and then you keep this very gentle ambiance. the quotation at the end about promises is driving me crazy however: please update soon!Author's response
Haha, I think you're the only person who has caught on to that! Yah, I saw that and I got all mushy inside because it was SO CUTE! And thanks for the nice thoughts! It's good to know I'm driving you crazy. ;]Surreal
(#) gucci84 2007-04-18
Oh PANDA! This was so good, but so short.
The way it started sucked me into that mood Delilah was in Right Away and Julius' behavior scared me.
Expecting to be yelled at and not getting it is probably the worst feeling at times. Very very very good job at making my heart want to break. But don't do it too often, it just might. LOL
I absolutely love how you add Synonyms and Definitions in the end. Makes me feel like I knew nothing the entire time I was reading then all of a sudden it's a puzzle all put together for me.
I'm dying for an update!
-Gucci
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