- nicely done. i thought the beginning of this chapter was bit slow, but the ending was good. will he fight moody too, of just surrender.
why is fleur sick? and where do you plan to take it from here? need more background information of these new 'tribe' of people. cheers.
Author's responseYes there hasn't been much action lately but rest I promise after the next to chapters there will be that nice helping of butt kicking that I promised. As for Fleur's sickness, lets just say it was indigestion or something. Her illness wasn't really important. As for background information on the "tribe". Well, that is part of the conspiracy and is meant to keep you guessing. All will be revealed in due time.
- Great so far, please update soon.
I looking forward to Harry and Fleur getting together - hope it won't hurt Bill too much though.
Will he enrole at Hogwarts to continue, thus (probably) having his true identity discovered (which I guess he doesn't even knoe himself)?
I love the way you've buildt up the templars, and look forward to learning more of their ranks and history.
Keep up the good work.
Author's responseYour right, Jericho doesn't know that he is Harry Potter right now. He will learn, but not for quite a while. I cant answer yes or no to any of your other questions or thoughts since that would spoil the story. More information on the Templar will be released on Friday with Chapter 5.
- Since I am only now after 16 chapters finding you I shall only review in multiples of 4 chapters until I catch up. You seem to have a very unique story here. I read a lot of this fiction and have yet to see one with this AU view of Harry to say nothing of his friends. The story is very well written and I am enjoying these first 4 chapters. You will hear from me again after chapter 8. Carol Layland, retired English Composition/History Teacher.
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