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A spy's role in life
7 reviewsThe Second War is about to begin, with Voldemort gaining power, and the Ministry denying his return. Ron&Hermione are looked as the ones to destroy HIM, but no one saw the return of the Savior they...
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Harry Potter and the Lantrisi
(#) TimGold 2007-04-18
Good chapter, a bit disappointed on the lack of detail of Harry and Hermiones shagging season but still, intersting!
More plxz!Harry Potter and the Lantrisi
(#) TheYanger 2007-04-18
I just started this story today but i have to say i love it, it is very good and though not exceptionally well written the plot keeps me hooked. keeep up the good work.Harry Potter and the Lantrisi
(#) oximoron 2007-04-18
I like the story however I noticed an amusing mistake regarding timeline in it. They go for their talk straight after dinner exchange maybe 40 words before he he sends Ron and Ginny off to Gryffindor tower because its almost curfew. So either its an early curfew or late dinner (personally I estimate dinner to be around 6 and curfew around 11)Author's response
Well, it's not really a mistake, as I wrote he meets them after dnner, but I didn't say immediately after, and I place curfew more around nine. Or just asume Harry just wanted to send them away.Harry Potter and the Lantrisi
(#) lycus 2007-04-18
I've Read A Lot Of Story's. And This One Is Just The Right Mix Of Action,Comedy,Violence,Gore And Sex.I Am A H/Hr Shipper And Even Though You Said That They Might Not Be Together In Your Story You Gave Us A Great H&H moment. So You Migtht As Well Put Them Together Eventually....Or Right Now Hermione Wouldn't Mind And Harry Has Already Compaired Her To Past Girlfriends.Harry Potter and the Lantrisi
(#) dravenskullwise 2007-04-19
I find this to be a very refreshing story. the whole galaxy and planet you set up for Harry's education, does it come from a book or series at all? Just interested. Ingenious about the dark mark and especially about Dumbledore's demise.Author's response
Thanks for the positive review, and to answer your question, the cross is with an original fic that is still WIP, and a long way from finished, but I had enough material to make a fanfic.Harry Potter and the Lantrisi
(#) jsdailey 2007-04-22
Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying the way Hermione is hardening as a character and Harry is "softening." That sort of character development really helps strengthen the H/Hr connection. Keep up the good work.
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