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Chapter One: Lost
9 reviewsKyo finds himself falling in love with our favorite directionally challenged ox and vice versa. but what happens when the worst possible person finds out and is determined to put a stop to this bud...
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Please Don't Leave Me
(#) MsCommandersons 2007-01-26
Very nice! I don't know how I missed this before! It's cute... The only thing I disliked was Haru calling Kyo "baby kitty" But it didn't worry me too much, for Kyo was dreaming :)
Update as soon as you can, I'm excited to see more from you! I am adding this story to my alerts!Please Don't Leave Me
(#) xXOrlaithXx 2007-02-28
Very cute, I enjoyed it very much! Hmm... well, I agree that Haru calling Kyo "baby kitty" was sort of weird--usually he's just called "kitty," or "kitten"--but that's mostly because I don't think I've ever heard it before. I still think it's a cute nickname and I could get used to it quickly. ^_^
The writing was smooth and transitional, not jumpy and overly descriptive. You did quite a NICE JOB! I hope you update. I can’t wait to see what Haru was doing out there and why he was face down in the mud. 0.oPlease Don't Leave Me
(#) xXOrlaithXx 2007-02-28
Very cute, I enjoyed it very much! Hmm... well, I agree that Haru calling Kyo "baby kitty" was sort of weird--usually he's just called "kitty," or "kitten"--but that's mostly because I don't think I've ever heard it before. I still think it's a cute nickname and I could get used to it quickly. ^_^
The writing was smooth and transitional, not jumpy and overly descriptive. You did quite a NICE JOB! I hope you update. I can’t wait to see what Haru was doing out there and why he was face down in the mud. 0.oPlease Don't Leave Me
(#) akane_fire 2007-03-17
Wow that was great, i love Kyo and Haru (also thinks about owning them both) drool :)... please do more!Please Don't Leave Me
(#) kaden292 2007-04-13
Great story, I wish you would write a new chapter soon, I can't wait and see what happens next!
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