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Corruption
2 reviewsWhen Harry is left in the dark alleys of Jump City in the middle of winter, the most surprising, and dangerous consequences occur. [HarryPotterTeenTitansXover]
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Corruption
(#) bookworm3213 2007-12-17
I take it you're not continuing your story? Ah well. It was good anyway (or, as good as it can be with only one chapter.) Just wanted you to know I liked it.Corruption
(#) Bookfiend 2008-06-08
Good story. I liked it. You asked for some CC, so here we go. When you introduce Dudly for the first time, you describe his hair as being pudgy. However, hair is not pudgy as pudgy is another term for overweight. That's the only thing that really stood out to me. That and the fact that you haven't continued a story that looks as though it would have been facinating.
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