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Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) riaryder 2007-05-01
Talk about finding the route straight to a girls heart, Mr Stump!
"You cooked a delicious dinner. The least I can do is the dishes."- yeah, that right there makes him marriage material!
And not losing the plot when an obnoxious boy asks inappropriate questions. But, yeah, I've totally got sympathy for Jeremy anyway, even if he is the epitome of evil right now.
And the colouring book thing. Just too funny that he was still colouring when she came back. Hell, that made me laugh like a mofo.
But you brought tears to my eyes with the daddy conversation. That hit close to home. You wrote that so beautifully.
Well done, for evoking so many emotions in one update.
You are tremendous xxxAuthor's response
Miss Ria! I'm sorry about the daddy conversation from a human's standpoint. But as a writer, I'm pretty psyched. Making people feel any sort of emotion is my goal. :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) reality_wounded 2007-05-04
Love this story. Not going into details as to why, but I love the fact that it's a whole May/December relationship. You are an excellent author and I hope you keep up the wonderful work!!Author's response
You used the term "May/December relationship". I'm officially in love with you. Thanks for reviewing. It means a lot, even if it's small.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) lclutebark 2007-05-05
hey!! I missed this story.
It's too bad that Jeremy can't apreciate a great step dad like Patrick hahaaha
Update soon.
XDAuthor's response
Seriously. That kid doesn't know how good he's got it. I'd kill for a hottie step dad. Alas, I have to settle for the one I have.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-05-08
/I glanced over to see only the bare wall. The poster was gone. Its crumpled corpse was haphazardly stuffed into the confines of a small wastebasket. I grimaced at the sight.
"Whatever. He better not call me anything gay. Like tiger or sport."
"I'm in a band?" He said as if it were a question.
"So I bet you nailed a lot of chicks, huh?" I inhaled sharply, nearly choking on a noodle.
“carpet face”/ -> Oh, the teenagerness of Jere: I LOVE IT! ;)
Great stuff like this only intimidates me to write myself. So you are to blame for my lack of updates.
Sorry it took me forever to read & review this. Everytime I wanted to ficcrap was down. But you know you role. Just check out your reviews & points. :)Author's response
I simply can't have the weight of your writer's block sitting on my shoulders. Can't we just blame the Brit? No hard feelings, I know FucWad is being difficult. :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) LOVELA 2007-05-09
You wrote a disgruntled teenager perfectly....how do you do it!? I need to know this secret power of yours! Seriously.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) falloutboyrox728 2009-01-19
I laughed when Jeremy called Patrick Carpet Face. XDD
Yeah, and I want Patrick for my birthday and mine is in July. ^___^
I ♥ Patrick and I ♥ this story. :)
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