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by Togot 1 review

Ever have a day where everything goes wrong? For Derek that is every day and he wants to end it. There's just one problem, it seems that he can't

Category: Humor - Rating: R - Genres: Humor, Sci-fi - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2007-05-05 - Updated: 2007-05-06 - 1375 words

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The Suicidal Immortal 2

(#) Ithilwen 2007-05-07

Oh, this shouldn't be funny but it is.

"Antichrist" is one word.

-"I remember that incident. Wait...that was you?" the priest asked.

This would be funnier if he just say "Wait ...that was you?"

You need an apostrophe in "old man's face."
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