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Harry Potter and the Curse of The Elemental
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-09-03
Interesting start to your story. I assume that you're a Ranma 1/2 fan immediately based on your warm/cold water twist. I picked reading this based on the trainwreck rating. I wanted to see how bad it was. I was surprised to see that it wasn't really that bad at all, HOWEVER, you do need a beta to pick out your grammar and spelling errors.Harry Potter and the Curse of The Elemental
(#) takethistoyourgrave 2007-09-07
You know, this really isn't that bad.
Obviously a beta is needed to correct your errors, but the story line is very interesting.
Overall, this story does not deserve a -1.Harry Potter and the Curse of The Elemental
(#) takethistoyourgrave 2007-09-07
You know, this really isn't that bad.
Obviously a beta is needed to correct your errors, but the story line is very interesting.
Overall, this story does not deserve a -1.Harry Potter and the Curse of The Elemental
(#) hptrump 2007-10-07
The turning into a girl I am not sure about just because he went into a forest and damaged a little vegetation. Extreme.
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