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• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) halleluiakid 2007-05-08

  aw! i simply adore this couple -
  
  write more please!
  =D

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-05-09

  I must be a total sexist because Patrick cries too much for my taste. Then again, he's asexual in my books so that's ok. ;)
  
  Swearing obnoxious Patrick was pretty manly though, of course.

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) LOVELA 2007-05-09

  Wait! There is one more thing I want to say about this story (and I want to be reviewer #100! I get a cheap thrill out of it...) A song went through my head during the angry Patrick/cop part...I think Alex would be proud. Ready????
  Bad Boys Bad Boys. Whatcha gonna do? Whathca gonna do when they come for you? Bad Boys Bad Boys. Whatcha gonna do? Whatcha gonna do when they come for you?
  bows

• Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

  (#) riaryder 2007-05-17

  I go away for one lousy week and you update like a woman possessed!
  Now that makes me feel happy :-)
  
  Absolutely loved angry Patrick. Pity he choose to take it out on the polis. Haha.
  
  And I loved how you tied up the Katy thing. And I re-iterate, it's nice to have an ex not being a psycho and actually acting like a decent (and sensible) human being. Nice work there lady.
  
  But mostly, I loved how you showed Petra's emotions at seeing her unborn baby. That put a wee lump in my throat.

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