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My Heart Can't Take This Hurt
(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-05-08
i love this story. Its really creative with with the way you made the parents crash into each other. Also, the way you work lyrics and songs/ music into the story really makes it different. You write really well to. I hate reading stories that its like what is this supposed to say??and that is totally not proper english!! (lols) but your a truly great writer. Keep up the good work! I'll be back for chapter 10!!
--NickyAuthor's response
Whoa, that means a lot! Really, since i'm from Iceland and all, and english is my second language =D
Thaanks ^^My Heart Can't Take This Hurt
(#) Alysha16 2007-05-08
wow...i realy like this story...its very creative and has the perfect amount of drama to make u want to read it...i really like the fact that sophie is there for ryan in his time of need.i also think that the fact that they both like each other but both think that the other doesnt like them is adorable...i cant wait to continue reading.luv ur style of writing...please update soon!
~Alysha~
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