- awesome... so it comes to a close.... i still don't know what 2 horecrux harry know about.. i know the locket... but whts the other one... no idea on the cup... anyway, congrats... a fitting end (Well, its not really the end is it) to a magnific story.... love to see a bit of payback with Fleur. especially since harry is not as shy as he was once before.... and i'm sure bill would love it.... a veela left all hot and bothered by harry... anyway, congrats.... nice to see more of luna...
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-05-08Well, I have to say that you did take this story in some directions that I didn't think about. I did enjoy it quite a bit. I do hope that you kept notes on some of your unfinished subplots, and intend to use them. The Potter Posers in this last chapter could be utilized interestingly. I hope that you consider that. In addition, Hermy's emaciated fun-bags need attention. With so much weight loss when that happens don't they end up looking like rather poorly shaped raisins that had spent too long in the bath? Absolutely an excellent way to end this one, but you have to set the book to complete now. :)
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-05-08Brilliant conclusion. It's a shame that we didn't get to see any face-to-face confrontations, but I'm very happy that Harry and Luna made peace. Hope to see the sequel soon, but then again, I pretty much like everything you write, so I doubt I'll be complaining as long as that keeps up.
(#) sensfraenz 2008-02-19At 1st: thanks for posting such an original, well written and brilliant story. I truly enjoyed this story and I hope for a sequel. Will there be a deeper relationsip with Luna? Is Gabrielle entering the picture? What will the reactions of the other ones left in Hogwarts say? And will Hack get the girls with his new look? We will see...
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