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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-10
Awesome as usual!! Love Petra and Patrick. Need to know about Ethan! Very good.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) luckysgc921 2007-05-10
YOOOOOO!
not cool leaving it there missy. I'm sitting on the edge of my really uncomfortable seat. But KISSIES! swoon. I want a patrick bun in the oven (but only a patrick one)Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-05-10
Petra and Patrick kissssssssesssssss are amazing.
yeah ok that was a tad obnoxious of me.
lol.
i can't believe the little lady is a murderer - good stuff, way to defend herself.
this update made my day.
yay!
though i agree leaving it there was uncool. lol.
love you forever.
pointsss as always.
xxo.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-05-10
YOU (Sorry, you did it to me, so I had to do it back.)
1. I really adore how much of a spitfire CeCe is in this story. Actually rings very true to life. I'm impressed that you have captured my personality so well over AIM. YOU R AMAZING!
2. The fact that Petra and Patrick are starting to become more affectionate and realizing their feelings for each other is completely adorable. You are capturing that so well.
3. The flashback was phenomenal. I totally did not see that coming which is another reason why you are uber Amazing. Yes, I said Uber.
4. Feel better missy.
Smooches and Points for you!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-05-10
wow, i didnt see that coming, but im mostly happy that it did and we know more about her past now. and their new found affection is absolutely adorable. i cant wait for more, points for you!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) danceislife 2007-05-10
I just don't know what to say....
shock...Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) fobgal1 2007-05-10
I loved it.
So thats what happened to her?
What happened after that?
Please update soon.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) halleluiakid 2007-05-10
=O holly shit!! i've never expected something like that!
wow..Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) duckapple 2007-05-10
Wow. This update just made my day a million times better. So. Thank you. I love you.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-11
I officially will be desperately awaiting a new chapter.
In the meantime, I'll be using "sodding" in everyday conversation. Thank you for having a better vocabulary than Americans.
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