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Dry cleaning explosion
15 reviewsTime is just a man-made measurement. Time changes everything. What you are always affects who you are. Sometimes you lose the most important things because of them. Short Patrick Story.
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Empty house not heart
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-11
Loved it again. I love how you put little facts about Patrick. Can't wait for more.Author's response
Thank you. I was really nervous about this chapter. It has such a different tone then the other ones. So, it means a lot that you liked it. Thanks for your continued support =)Empty house not heart
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-11
I once walked out on a guy I was living with. I took the cat.
I did not know Patrick had a three-legged cat. That's sad and amusing at the same time.
I still love this story. Please keep writing.Author's response
Haha.I'm sorry if this is bringing back memories. lol Yeah i know, Patrick has had about three cats in total. Marizpan which was three legged, Sam and another cat but i can't get the name of it. Sorry =( Thank you though for reading. I am glad it is still being enoyed. The last chapter made me very nervous, but thank you!Empty house not heart
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-11
Woah, I kinda wanted to rate it hot, I'd be useless in an argument with him cos I'd just be there be totally seduced. lolAuthor's response
HaaHa. Yeah, the sexiness before you would be breathtaking. I completely agree. But, they've been together three years I think Michele was kind of able to develop a little immunity. The only thing that might still work is when he pouts. That bottom lips.. yum.
Thank you for reading though!I am glad you;ve kept up with the story!.Empty house not heart
(#) xharlequingirl 2007-05-11
aol isnt working for me, so i read this here. my best friend is stilll amazing. i loved this. patrick's oh so jealous of pete's beautiful girlfriend ;). lol. ♥. loveeeyou.Author's response
wait.. what? Patrick isnt jealous.. what story are you reading? lmfao. why is your away message still up? Come back come back!Empty house not heart
(#) newyorkeyes 2007-05-11
whoo! go patrick. she got what she deserved. she should have stuck it out with him. i wouldnt have been able to resist patrick. great job, can't wait to see more.Author's response
AWW no, see Michele stayed with him for three years. It is hard to be in a relationship when he is gone more than he is with you. Especially Patrick who loves the music soo much. Thank you though for reading and reviewing. Patrick iss a sexyy MOFO, hahah. The next chapter will be posted as soon as I finish it =)Empty house not heart
(#) Rae_She_Writes 2007-05-13
I am enjoying every minute of this story. MArzipan is such a cute name for a cat! Anyway, please update soon. I love reading fanfiction :D Especially good fan fiction, and yours would definetely fall under the good, probably great, category.Author's response
Wow. I am shocked. I find it almost absurd that people believe my stories could be considered good, or like you said great. That just seems so amazing. Thank you soo very much for reading and reviewing. It means so much that you enjoyed it. And yes, marzipan is a cute name. Patrick named him. ;)Empty house not heart
(#) newyorkeyes 2007-05-14
I know I wrote a review already, but this is more of a plea! There is not much on this site to read that has caught my attention [anything you can recommend?] I need you to update this soon. I'm going absolutely insane without an update. I might have to hunt you down and bribe you with Patrick-flavored cupcakes. :-DAuthor's response
Patrick-flavored cupcakes? Hmm... that sounds strangely delicious. HAHA It does give me some bad thought though. Anyway, thank you for the plea it is nice to know that my story actually was missed. I am in the process of writing the next chapter. I promise it will be up ASAP. Most likely tonight. My friend has written some amazing stories, (i know it might seem biased but she really is a great author) Her username is xharlequingirl
Check her out! Thank you again for your continued support and I promise an update by tonight.Empty house not heart
(#) newyorkeyes 2007-05-15
Patrick flavored cupcakes are pure sex. I will make you a batch. And, thank you for the recommendation. I've read a few things, not a big fan, but if you say so, I will dig deeper and see if I can find some gold. Thanks again and I can't wait for an update. ex's and oh's.Author's response
YUM! They sound delicious! I also hope you find some stories that you love. And I updated the story, so i hope you enjoy it!
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