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Wish That I Was As Invisable As You Make Me Feel.
3 reviewsGerard is invisable in the eyes of his high school hoping to somehow get noticed, Frank's the farthest thing from invisable and gets increasingly tired of it. And when the two are put together? Wel...
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To The End
(#) A_Fallen_Shadow 2007-05-07
awesome! love this idea! but lets see what ray thinks...
ray: great! i probably wont come up in this much. but its good so far, and its got a cliffhanger.
me: :CHAINSAW PISSED:
ray: :sweatdrop: ok so anyway, its god so far, i really cant give a decent reveiw until the next chapter. so...
both of us: UPDATE SOON!!!To The End
(#) A_Fallen_Shadow 2007-05-07
awesome! love this idea! but lets see what ray thinks...
ray: great! i probably wont come up in this much. but its good so far, and its got a cliffhanger.
me: :CHAINSAW PISSED:
ray: :sweatdrop: ok so anyway, its god so far, i really cant give a decent reveiw until the next chapter. so...
both of us: UPDATE SOON!!!Author's response
Woa... you liked it so much you replied four different times haha. Im really glad you like it. I was really kinda worried. I guess your my only fan. Oh well. Thanks for the review, I'm working on chapter two now.To The End
(#) A_Fallen_Shadow 2007-05-07
awesome! love this idea! but lets see what ray thinks...
ray: great! i probably wont come up in this much. but its good so far, and its got a cliffhanger.
me: :CHAINSAW PISSED:
ray: :sweatdrop: ok so anyway, its god so far, i really cant give a decent reveiw until the next chapter. so...
both of us: UPDATE SOON!!!To The End
(#) A_Fallen_Shadow 2007-05-07
awesome! love this idea! but lets see what ray thinks...
ray: great! i probably wont come up in this much. but its good so far, and its got a cliffhanger.
me: :CHAINSAW PISSED:
ray: :sweatdrop: ok so anyway, its god so far, i really cant give a decent reveiw until the next chapter. so...
both of us: UPDATE SOON!!!To The End
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-05-11
I've only just read the first chapter now, and I have to say, it's awesome! Seriously! I'm adding it to my faves list and I'll be waiting for an update hint hint, wink wink ;)To The End
(#) mcr_lover103 2007-05-11
Hey, I'm the who is writing "I'd end my days with you in a hail of bullets"! I love your story! you have to update it immediatley and I'll update mine tooTo The End
(#) Amyora 2007-05-12
Hey! Wow, AMAZING! Like HOLY FUCKIN GOD!!! GEEZ! haha... Gee... hahha! Hey Frankie, GEEZ!!! rotflmao! Bitch, Ima shank yo ass if yo' don't read my shit! hahah! jk jk! me love you... maybe... oh oh oh! ...oh no! Gee's at the bottom of the bottle! He's only got one swallow... Ok I'm done... I HAD TO!! HAHAHAH! Gotta love the alleyhole! haha! peace out, motha-fucka!To The End
(#) KMidnite 2007-06-05
Ohmygosh! You're writing a story, and I didn't even know about it? I am such a bad friend!
(Since you give me such long comments, I am going to give you same thing. I am sure you love it anyway.)
You even write better than me! LOL.
Okay... chapter review. Can I just say this is the very first MCR fan fic I have ever read in FicWad? Well it is, and is a damn good one. I love Gerard's character. It's very, me! LOL. I am NOT shy, most of the time. I do stutter, a lot, and I like to put people on pedestals, but anyway this is about the story, not me. I hope Frank and him can be friends and whatnot. Maybe he can straighten him out.
Okay... I haven't read most of the story yet and I have a chapter to write, so I'll read and review first thing after i post my chapter. you should do the same
You are so rad, you even put the damn word in teh story. HUH!
AmandaTo The End
(#) wtfwhore 2007-06-29
this story had me cracking up. OH my GOD.
"Hah, I'm so damn good looking, I even got the same sex checking me out."
I about fell out my chair when i read that.
Funny shit man!
can't wait to read the rest. urgh
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