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Things Were So Simple
(#) crys_within_816 2007-05-14
omg. gerard such a but face!!!
what the hell is wrong with him??
GRRThings Were So Simple
(#) XxkelseyxX 2007-05-14
really good,
just pick a perpsective to tell the story from, its a bit comfusing to switch between third person, and jackie's p.o.v
xoxoxoxThings Were So Simple
(#) WynonaKing90 2007-05-14
WHAT IS GERARD'S DAMN PROBLEM?????? IS HE MENTAL???? WHY CANT HE JUST SAY 'I FUCKING LOVE YOU, JACKIE'?????
it is not that hard =/.
lol...loved this chapter.
Some ideas that may help you with your brain freeze:
1. mikey crushes on jackie.
2. gerard can't say 'i love you'
to jackie cause he actually is starting to fall for the whore.
3. jackie can't decide between mikey and gerard.
4. jackie gets together with mikey, but cheats on him with gerard in this (excuse my cheesyness) passionate affair. she dosen't want to break it off with mikey cause she dosen't want to hurt him, but she has lots of lust towards gerard. but has a feeling her thing with gerard is more lust than love and her thing with mikey is more love than lust.
anyways....those are my ideas.
they suck...but may-be a little thing in there inspired you...SO YOU CAN FRIKKEN UP DATE SOON =]Author's response
thanx lots, and they were really good ideas, and i was thinking about having that twist with mikey in there but still wasnt too sure about it, but now i know i...(im not givin anything away)Things Were So Simple
(#) rocker4lifeSAM 2007-05-14
aahh dammit that last part grrr... goosd chapter much suspense. update soon.
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