(#) ssketchator 2007-05-15That was a really cute ending.
Congratulations on being a completely awesome writer; this was probably the first sex scene I've read on here that didn't have a single awkwardly written phrase. I loved it.
And I love how Patrick's such a girl. =]
- So So So many things I like about this chapter!
First: I love how Petra is taking on the role of the male being all mood breaking and Patrick is the girl and annoyed by it. It's a nice change.
Second: Pete telling Patrick that he is immature. Now that's funny.
Third: Petra and Patrick's phone conversation. Perfect. And Petra kicking her feet after. I do that all the time...I'm such a girl.
Fourth: Petra and Patrick. 'Nough Said! They are so cute and so in need of couple's therapy. It's screaming! I dabble in that sort of thing...I can help them out.
Fifth: FLUMP! LOVE IT!
Sixth: YOU! I love you! I miss you! Points and Smooches ALL FOR YOU!!!
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