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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-05-15
that was too touching for words. im so happy they're both finally starting to realize what they have right before their eyes.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) DetectiveDaughter 2007-05-15
That was a perfect chapter. I'm jealous. Great job! I love the 'Take out?' bit. Inspired.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-15
This is such an amazing story. I love it so much. What is Petra hiding?? Loved the ending. Made me smile and laugh!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-05-15
I'm late for class, and i'll be back later to leave you an amazing review but for right now i have one thing to say:
YAY!!!!
love it!
xxoMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-15
That was a really cute ending.
Congratulations on being a completely awesome writer; this was probably the first sex scene I've read on here that didn't have a single awkwardly written phrase. I loved it.
And I love how Patrick's such a girl. =]Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) luckysgc921 2007-05-15
once again I didn't get an email...
but....iz ded
I love them more then any other ficwadians I think. nods
Petra and Patrick are Perfect.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-05-15
So So So many things I like about this chapter!
First: I love how Petra is taking on the role of the male being all mood breaking and Patrick is the girl and annoyed by it. It's a nice change.
Second: Pete telling Patrick that he is immature. Now that's funny.
Third: Petra and Patrick's phone conversation. Perfect. And Petra kicking her feet after. I do that all the time...I'm such a girl.
Fourth: Petra and Patrick. 'Nough Said! They are so cute and so in need of couple's therapy. It's screaming! I dabble in that sort of thing...I can help them out.
Fifth: FLUMP! LOVE IT!
Sixth: YOU! I love you! I miss you! Points and Smooches ALL FOR YOU!!!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) halleluiakid 2007-05-16
bwauhauhauhua, bad,baaaad cook.
lovely couple.
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