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I Love Him...But He Doesn't Know That..
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Genetic Design For Dying
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-04-22
I really like it so far! I'll be looking out for more!!Genetic Design For Dying
(#) LadyLapisLazuli 2007-04-22
Wow, this is very good! I did notice some errors though. You wrote 'ill' at one point instead of 'I'll'. When you say the word 'I' it has to be a capital letter. Keep writing! :DGenetic Design For Dying
(#) Silvana 2007-09-27
A couple of minor grammar errors but apart from that it's really good.
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