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you can keep my brother
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-05-19
Loved it! But aw, they're arguing again!!!
I like the description and story line in this. Also you're good at dialogue and writing in general! -Jessie xoxAuthor's response
blushing and looking down shyly glad you think that...i loveee writing the dialogue especially for mikey and skyler...you can keep my brother
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-05-19
heyaa big waves just read the newer chaps and love them just like the olders, you keep the good work up^__^ i really love their convos, those are always amusing as fuck( does that sound bad or is it just me? ), even when they're arguing. so yeahhh, id love to see more. read more. oh, whatever.:DAuthor's response
waving back the dialogue is my favorite part to write, i can really go crazy there and let my imegination run wild or put stuff me and my friends are talking about. i'll update again really soon!!you can keep my brother
(#) mrsgerardway616 2007-05-19
i think it was a great chapter.Author's response
thanx! everytime i write something with gerard and sky i always worry it's too cheesy or mushy..
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