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Edgar reflects, Locke interrupts. Written for Brie, just because she asked.
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The Burden of the Crown
(#) DomaDoma 2006-02-09
I wasn't exactly expecting the slash there - you should have put up a warning - but you managed to make it believable within their characters, which is tough to do when one of them is Edgar. Congrats!
Anyway, your insights into Edgar's mind were well-integrated into his character. Locke's too, obviously, but Edgar is done a lot less often and is probably more difficult. Good sketch!
Author\'s Response: Thanks! (... You mean the "R" rating wasn't enough of a warning? After "Locke interrupts?")The Burden of the Crown
(#) lassarina 2006-07-22
I like the flowing dialogue you have between Edgar and Locke; it seems very in-character for both of them. Also, I like the way they both shy away from discussing anything too important.
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