Second chances they don't ever matter, people never change. Once a whore you're nothing more, I'm sorry, that'll never change.
(#) prissynblack 2007-05-25FIRST REVIEWER! finally!
OMG! that was so good!
Once again you come back with a brillant outstanding chapter! I think your a great author and I wish i could write like that! I loved how you put what melody was saying inbewteen what ryan was doing to brendon. i totally understand whats going on! SO awesome!
before i explode.........
- TANTALIZING. That's the word for the end of this chapter, woman!!
How dare you leave us like that...lol. Ryan...just leaving...the next morning? We need EXPLANATIONS, so I'm expecting some in the next chappie. :)
I love the way you kind of portrayed both Brendon and Ryan...it really makes the split 50/50, like, none of us REALLY knows who's gonna give in first...
And I think they should finally give in and get together. Or Jon or someone should set up a plan to make one of them say sorry, please take me back, yadida.
But...yeah. XD I love this fanfic!
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