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Chapter 14 - Dumbledore's Anger - an interlude
3 reviewsA little history lesson from Harry...to Tom, Remus, Lucius and Severus
5Exciting
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Return of the Black Rose
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-05-26
Awesome chapter, but don't you think that Harry would hug his new sister.Author's response
I think that HArry doesn't know exactly how to act or react... Think about it... He's never really had a hug till Molly Weasley gave him one and the only other person likely to have given him one is Hermione. Affection is just something he doesn't know much about or how to deal with so he's erring on the side of caution.Return of the Black Rose
(#) Cateagle 2007-05-26
Ahh, so now we get a better understanding of Dumble's actions and goals. I have to complement you on the second nastiest Manipulative!Dumbledore I've read, only the one in "Flames of Betrayal" is nastier. I love the fact that Harry hasn't been sitting back unquestioningly, but has been researching and thinking for himself; I wonder what sending a copy of this research to Hermione would do for her faith in Dumbledore after the revelations of Sirius' will?
You've still got some problems with verb tenses, but they didn't seem quite as noticeable in this chapter.
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