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So this is Goodbye
11 reviewsTime is just a man-made measurement. Time changes everything. What you are always affects who you are. Sometimes you lose the most important things because of them. Short Patrick Story.
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Empty house not heart
(#) xharlequingirl 2007-05-26
OoOoo who the heck is Cheyenne? Is she Pete's most beautiful wife? JK. Yet another amazing update, best friend. I can't wait to see where else this goes because it's not like you've told me. And, I will always loveeeeee you. ::breaks into whitney houston minus the crack:: ♥ ♥Author's response
LMFAO. YOu're singing whitney houston> oy vey.. can we leave the singing to Patrick. Thank you. HAHHA JK JK. ILU2. You want to know what's going to happen? Adam Levine is going to meet her at LAX as she's leaving and sweep her off her feet they will fall madly in love and Patrick will be too late. MUAH HA HA HAHA. Wait.. I LOVE Adam. oops? it's okay. I'll kidnap him on Monday =)Empty house not heart
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-26
Love it as always. I feel so bad for Patrick. He wants her so much! Love it!Author's response
Awww, I am so glad you're enjoying this story. Patrick is heartbroken, but so is Michele. Decisions and life just kind of separates people. Hopefully things will work out for the best. Thank you soo much for continuing to keep up with this story.Empty house not heart
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-27
Yeah this was terrific, i hate using that word, it's too similar to terror which is totally NOT what this chapter was.
Aside from being utterly insightful, I'm enjoying reading more about Michele and Patrick's relationship now that it's over ( insert QUESTION MARK HERE) because I'm a believer. ;)
Thanks for updating! Hope your finals went OK,
Lovely hugs
xxxxxAuthor's response
LMAO. No one has ever compared terrific and terror, but i can totally see it. HAH Thank you soo much for reading tihs. I am soo glad you continue to read and review it means soo much to me. It just leaves me astonished that people remain interested. My finals weren't as bad as i expcected but they're nerve wracking nevertheless. Please keep a look out, an update may be coming up soon...hopefully. =) :::BIGG HUGG:::Empty house not heart
(#) fobgal1 2007-05-27
Poor Patrick.
He loves her so much.
Please update soon.Author's response
Yes, Patrick does love her its unfortunate he didn't realize how much he loved/needed her until he lost her. =( I am going to try to update this story soon. I promise Thank you soo much for supporting me and this story. It means the world to me. thank youEmpty house not heart
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-27
I say it every time, but your writing blows my mind. You have a talent for making your readers understand the characters' emotions without being too obvious about it.
I love how mature they both are, and I love this kind of give-and-take thing they're doing with the blame. I hope that made sense.Author's response
I am soo sorry it took so long for me to respond back to this review. Ficwad was being well.. crappy and i kind of i dunno. Anyway, i am usually always in amazement after I read one of your reviews. Thank you soo much. You give me the confidence to keep writing. I completely understand how you see the characters being mature about their feelings and the break-up. Its civil and mutual. It may be because no matter what they cannot deny how much they still love eachother. Thank you!Empty house not heart
(#) newyorkeyes 2007-05-29
I am so late on reviewing this! I am so sorry. Finals all this week and then memorial day weekend was insane. I just want to tell you this chapter knocked my socks off. I can't believe this! And I love Patrick's Screen name! Good job on that! Cute!!Author's response
It is quite alright. I know allll about finals and being busy. No need to apologize about that. HAHA you are the ONLYY one to notice or comment on Patrick's sn. Trust me that one thing drove me completely nuts. I was never satisfied. Eventually i just went for something cute/funny. I am glad you enjoyed it/reviews! thank youuu =)
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