in which Molly gets readjusted to Chicago life and in which Molly and Patrick finally put an end to their song and dance... THE END
(#) smilesonourfaces 2007-05-27Wow. I seriously love this story. The whole way it comes together, and then they fall apart, come together... it's just amazing. I don't think I've reviewed this before, and I don't know why. Chalk it up to being lazy.
But yes... LOVE this story. If you put up a sequel, I'll be sure to read it (along with everyone else, too xD)... and I'll review more xP
- Nooooooo! I don't want it to be over!!!! I want a sequel posted tomorrow....OK, not really. I know how hard this story was for you. But now your labor of love has come to an end. Thank you for a nice little ending. I wasn't sure if I was going to get it. I liked Molly's speech to Jaime, especially because she's been there, done that. She was in his shoes once and hopefully he'll straighten up...or be on the next episode of "COPS" I'm also in love with Patrick apologizing and sort of proposing. Don't stress over a sequel. Give your brain some time to regenerate and whatnot. I'll be here waiting. Ya know, this is going to be my last review for this story :( and the last point...unless...
(#) stumpitharderbabyoh 2007-05-27OMG I ACTUALLY CRIED!!!
oh wow once againg this is not only my favorite fan fiction i have ever read but one of my favorite stories!!!
and not to be like bitchy or anything its actually "cause i wouldnt believe you if you said that shit to me"
Author's responseand not to be like bitchy or anything, but no its not. check your album liner before you make pointless critisim.
- I can't believe you finished your masterpiece.
And thank you, thank you for finally getting them back together.
You've totally made me day.
And I notice the added bonus of a sequel. You are totally spoiling me.
Well done, lady. This story was amazing from beginning to end x
(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-11-11mmkay, so I just found this fanfic, even though you finished it like half a year ago. :/ I just got finished reading it over the past four days (the length is quite unique. lol) but I loved every second of it. I didn't really want to review on every chapter, but I did feel a little guilty when you were begging for reviews. Hopefully this final one will make up for all of the other ones I neglected (note that it's going to be a long ramble of incoherent opinions. proceed if you're willing.) haha.
I really loved the story. Every twist and turn in the plot seemed to flow really well and everything seemed so well planned.
The relationship between the characters was very well written. I liked how you displayed several different types of relationships and everyone wasn't just "we're such happy -insert type of relation here-". (does that make any sense at all?) The progression of Pete and Molly's relationship was the best in my opinion. I thought I would get fed up with their constant bickering, but the fact that they matured enough to be really good friends seemed very natural and amazing to me.
The drama was thick, but not too overbearing. I still had hope throughout it that everything would work out well, and I think that was through the determination that your characters displayed. I know they wouldn't give up too easily. The ending was AMAZING, in my opinon. I can't put into words how happy I was that Molly and Patrick wound up together (although I was suspecting it all along, some people take pride in making their leading (supposed) star-crossed lovers end heartbroken.)
all in all, this was a very well written story in every aspect that I can think of. I really enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait to venture over to your artist page and start reading the sequel in a few minutes. haha.
'Twas awesome. Keep up the writing.
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