- Cliffhangers are not nice, especially cliffhangers like that.
The old couple cracked me up.
Patrick sure does get embarrassed easily.
Please update soon.
I'm dying to know what happens to Peyton.
Author's responselol I'm "dying" to know whats gonna happen to her too lol but I'm glad you liked it thank you sooo much!
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-05-30Sooo... Henry and Betty are two of my new favorite people. Seriously. I wanted to hug them... and when I'm old, that's how I'm gonna model my behavior. I want to tell all the youngsters about condoms... and hope to hell that I'm still having sex.
Anyway, I loved a number of these things in this chapter... (Though I would like to note from the pervious chapter... I DID notice that Peyton jumped into a relationship rather quickly, I just didn't really want to say anything. You know? Like, I know YOU already know, so why bring it up? Plus I have the sneeking suspicion that it'll be an issue at some point... like an argument of some sort and Patrick being like 'I was just a rebound, wasn't I?' Oooo... I like it...)
Oooooooook. Now that that's out of my system.
I'm totally in love with Pete. Seriously. I wish he'd kiss my finger gently. lol. :) And the Andrew kid and Gwen's reaction= I loved it. You know, you're amazing...
And Patrick better come to the freakin rescue!!!!! I mean, he's going to show up before it's too late, right? Because they are too adorable.. I count on my Patrick Peyton fix to get me through... and if something aweful happened to Peyton... well, I don't know what I'd do. Ok, that's a total lie- I would harrass you tinto telling me.
But that's beside the point.
Oh well.... you're fantastic and I love ya babe!!! Update and make my day!!! PLEASE?!?!? How oh how can I bribe you? A point perhaps? I shall see...
- This chapter had it all: humor, cute lovey dovey shit, kids being little shits, and DRAMA! I love the cliffhanger. Patrick better hurry up and save the day like the squishy hero that he is. Wonderful job!
Author's responseLOL I really did LOL when I saw squishy hero I was like WTF! LOL and it made my day so thank you so much I less than three you!!
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