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Everything Must Belong Somewhere
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-30
What can I say, what a stunning style you have, I'm seriously impressed and not because I didn't expect it but I'm impressed at how it flows, i felt like I didn't have to read, I felt like I was just listening to someone talk and I was getting inside there head.
Charley is quite a vixen, i love her thinking process, she must get tired contstantly fighting with herself! But it's entertaining to read.
Thanks for posting - I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
Rated!
xxxxxxxEverything Must Belong Somewhere
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-05-31
YES! ok I feel totally bad for not reviewing sooner..but alas ficwad has hated me beyond...yeah LOL.
I loved it, it is one of my new favorites. You flow so well, its like I feel like I'm right there with your characters. With popcorn. Because I love drama just so you know haha.
Awesome..Points for you my dear!!Everything Must Belong Somewhere
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-05-31
YES! ok I feel totally bad for not reviewing sooner..but alas ficwad has hated me beyond...yeah LOL.
I loved it, it is one of my new favorites. You flow so well, its like I feel like I'm right there with your characters. With popcorn. Because I love drama just so you know haha.
Awesome..Points for you my dear!!Everything Must Belong Somewhere
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-03
Again, still, love your writing style. And vodka.
I really really adore Charley. Everything she says, thinks, does... it's incredible. And I give you massive kudos for being able to create such a cynical, sarcastic jerk and at the same time create Zak. Who is a beautiful man.Author's response
i'm so glad you were able to recognize the different personality traits between zak and charley. i wasn't sure if i had described zak's personality as well as i see it in my head. it's awesome to know i somewhat explained it accurately. thanks for this review.
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