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I remember...
45 reviewsFrank/Gerard oneshot. PG-13 pretty much for boy/boy, implied-ish sex, and sadness i guess if its really sad at all... not so good, but ok i guess...
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I remember...
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-31
I still think the last one that says I remember 'the week' dosent fit right... Each other reference is to a specific moment in time. I think thats what makes it so powerful. Little moments in time. Thats all we are. But 'a week' sounds like too long. Id change it to be more specific. Make it a specific felling or moment. The more specific the better. (I remember the feel of his kiss; or I remember the look in his eye as we stared out the window. he wanted to go home blah blah... ) I dont know theres so many ways and you've done an amazing job on this....
Dont EVER write in your summary that you dont think your writing is good!----xoxoAuthor's response
uhhh, ill think about it but i dont really get how to change it..
thanks for your comment glad u liked! =)I remember...
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-05-31
That was seriously sad and beautiful! It was really sweet all the way through it and brought tears to my eyes. I love the way you wrote it. How you put at the beggining of the memories, I remember when...and at the end, I was -- and he was --
I absolutely loved that story!!! -Jessie xoxI remember...
(#) Fewli-xx 2007-06-01
... :'/ Made me wanna cry.Author's response
good or bad? mm, thanks for reading thoz!I remember...
(#) lups 2007-06-02
ohmygod. that was simply GREAT. i could actually see all of it like screen shots, youknow? like photographs... AND... it took me to the edge of tears at the end...Author's response
lol thanks i was hoping youd b able to picture it! =)I remember...
(#) RyanRossIsLove 2007-06-20
it made me cry. then every one looked at me weird on the train. but, wow...it was beautiful.I remember...
(#) toasty_vampire 2007-06-26
Wow. This was...amazing. It was sad, and it really touched me. Great job on it; it was thought-provoking and gentle in it's simplicity. Two thumbs up, keep on writing please!!!I remember...
(#) ilovemikey 2007-09-02
oh wow, that was so sad. hell, i'm nearly crying. you're a great writer! keep wrtitng, you rule.
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